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Read the paragraph and edit, as necessary. There are five mistakes in verb form and one mistake in punctuation. If people continue to choose to move…

BBS Business English · 2078 · Solved Question with Answer

Read the paragraph and edit, as necessary. There are five mistakes in verb form and one mistake

 in punctuation.

If people continue to choose to move from small towns into cities for greater opportunities, cities will have to

 adapt to the changes in their populations. Cities will need to create more affordable housing for new

residents. They are need to build schools for their children so that they will

study, and parks so that they will play. Transportation and other services will needing to be expanded to accommodate larger numbers of

people. if the city meets this challenge people will be able to move to and from their jobs easily. If it does not,

 people probably earn less money, as they will only be able to accept work that is close to their homes. As cities

expand, new neighbourhoods will being created in areas that are now uninhabited. Areas that were once

 considered suburban will most probably be swallowed up by urban expansion and become part of the city. As

 new neighbourhoods are established, new businesses will also open to meet the needs of these new residents.

 With these new businesses are coming new jobs,

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